I am excited to have finished the revised draft “Part 2: Learning to Trust” of “Tishta the Crystal Orb.” It felt good to finish in only six days.
I trimmed fewer words—only about 800—leaving the word count for this part at 32,106. At the same time, the number of pages went up by one. This was primarily due to my continued focus on my new practice of making sure most paragraphs focus on a single character’s actions. If I had not trimmed 800 words, it would have gone up by closer to three pages.
So far, I have stuck with my decision to wait to record this draft until I finish the edits. It makes me uncomfortable. I may still choose not to release the book to my Beta Readers until after I record it and have a chance to listen to it. I need to hear what I have written before I feel it is correct. Listening really helps me find repeated words, characters who are out of character, and bad cadence. I also find missing or extraneous periods and commas as I read along. If you have not recorded and listened to yourself reading your work, I highly recommend it.
Part 2 still feels a little slow to me. It covers the characters getting to know each other better—and there are a lot of characters, on both sides. There is one major battle that results in a serious injury to one of the warriors, but the real action does not start until part 3. What I mean is, that is when a couple of big battle scenes take place and things get really serious. I like the relationship building—and part 2 contains the start of Gentu and Coltan’s love affair, complete with a couple of sex scenes—but I like battle scenes the best. Go figure. I guess that is why I do not write romance novels.
It has been fun to come upon scenes I do not remember writing—they were added during the second draft—since I have so many of the original ones memorized (or nearly so—a lot has changed since the first draft). With some of them, I will need to hear the story again to determine if they should stay or get deleted. Feedback from Beta Readers and a potential edit by an editor will be more useful—I like all of my words, so find it difficult to delete them. Although I have done a fair amount of shortening scenes, I have not deleted any completely.
As soon as I finish, I plan to release a Beta to my Beta Readers. If you’re interested in helping with this, let me know at TheWolfDreamBooks@gmail.com, and I’ll add you to the list. The work for you would be to read the book in a timely manner and give me feedback. The reward will be eternal gratitude and an autographed copy (if and when a physical book is produced), or maybe a signed special edition of the final ebook.
“Part 3: Travels and Battles” is around 30% longer than part 2. Hopefully, I will get through it in a week. The end of September will be here before we know it, and I hope to be through this revision by then. Back to work.
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